I'm an IA Ambassador. What better pitch to practice than one concerning the most exhilarating undergraduate program which I represent?
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https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B9XCvjV9Hw-EZG5PZ1VPenF5NHc/view?usp=sharing
My feedback was all very positive and I didn't have a lot of constructive criticism to build off of. Please include ways I may improve in the comments :-)
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ReplyDeleteI am not sure if I clicked the wrong link but the link listed above does not lead to an elevator pitch. I am sure it was great just wish I could have seen it.
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ReplyDeleteI enjoyed watching your elevator pitch, your delivery was smooth and well paced, and you did a good job of emphasizing key points. I learned a lot in one minute, which means your effectiveness was excellent. I do have one tip for you: set your script higher at camera level. That way you don't have to look down to read or check bullet points. Keeping eye contact consistent with the camera (or live person) will help keep the interest level up. Great job!
Hey Kenzie, I really enjoyed watching your second elevator pitch. I think you did a really great job of talking smoothly and not too fast. I also think maybe you should look more directly at the camera. I did notice you were looking off at a few points. I also recommend to step back a little further from the camera so the audience can see your entire body. Overall I think you had a fantastic elevator pitch.
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